Annotations: From my feedback on my first draft I have decided to add a lot more colour in order to make it brighter and effective. This overall creates a more appealing page for the reader as it is colourful and bond. Taking in account my feedback, I have decided to enlarge the school logo which really works well as the reader is aware and alert. Overall, I have decided to add writing next to the numbers in order for the reader to turn to a certain page of their choice; for my final piece, I will add somewhat of a description.
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