Front Cover- The text needs rearranging in order to look more professional and cover lines need to be changed around. I will enlarge the image in order for it to be on top of the mast-head. This will define the image more making it stand out to catch the eye of the reader. This is important as when I carried out my questionnaire, people bought magazine due to the cover image.
Contents Page- I will rearrange the images and text to create a more effective and professional page. It will consist of three original images which will take up the majority of the page. The text will be smaller in order. I need to switch all the headings and text around to see what will be the most effective product. I need to change the font and colours to suit the audience.
Double Page Spread- The biggest factor that I need to change is the text. This is too large and needs to rearranged smaller to look like a successful product. The title is to simple and needs a pull quote in order to stand out. The image could change sides to see where the text would look better. I need to also think of an effective title to pull in the reader.
